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Mystery Week, Day 25, SGA Story

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Title: Campfire Law
Author: Propaganda ([info]notpoetry)
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 11,500
Summary: The summer before college, Rodney the camp counselor meets John the lifeguard at Camp Atlantis. Homesick kids, campfires, and Scooby Doo Mysteries ensue.
Notes: This is a total AU, set at a summer camp. Thank you to [info]eleveninches and [info]sathinks, and I feel compelled to note that this entire thing is [info]barely_bean's fault, but then I guess turnabout is fair play.

Worship God (mm-hmm-hmm).
Seek beauty, give service, and knowledge pursue.
Be trustworthy ever in all that you do.
Hold fast onto health and your work glorify,
and you will be happy in the law of Campfire.
-- Campfire USA Law


Campfire Law, again, hosted on my site due to formatting issues.

Poll #895215
Open to: All, detailed results viewable to: All, participants: 35

Who is today's mystery author? *drumroll*

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eleveninches
10 (28.6%)
notpoetry
20 (57.1%)
scrunchy
5 (14.3%)

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[info]minnow1212

December 26 2006, 05:48:35 UTC 5 years ago

What awesome, awesome fun.

[info]ceares

December 26 2006, 08:48:16 UTC 5 years ago

Cute and funny. I love John and Ronon sneaking up on Rodney constantly and the sweet little flirtation between John and Rodney. Everyone was very much 'themselves' throughout, and it's easy to imagine them all as these teenagers.

[info]wychwood

December 26 2006, 10:36:17 UTC 5 years ago

[info]scrunchy? I dunno, but the humour feels plausible.

This is awesome. I laughed so hard. Rodney freaking out at John and Ronon's super-stealth skills, and Zelenka and Carson laughing at Rodney's crush, and the Genii breaking in... This was very cute.

[info]merelyn

December 26 2006, 14:18:56 UTC 5 years ago

I have no idea who wrote it, but holy crap I love this.

[info]swanswan

December 26 2006, 16:43:57 UTC 5 years ago

Scrunchy for camp details!! LOVED it!! So much!! I want to be warm and have dusty feet and have a dripping wet John Sheppard sit on the dock beside meeeeee!! Gorgeous story.

[info]shara50

December 26 2006, 17:58:08 UTC 5 years ago

That was really fun, thanks.

[info]birdsflying

December 26 2006, 20:58:08 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, so much love! And it's totally Notpoetry because, damn - this is a insider's fic. :g:

[info]torakowalski

December 26 2006, 22:40:04 UTC 5 years ago

"God. I hate you all so much right now that I can't even express it in words. I may have to sing. Or I wish that I knew, oh, ballet so that I could possibly communicate my hate to you through the medium of dance, because there are not words -- wait, no, I have words: poison ivy! Mosquitoes! Thorn bushes! Little pointy sticks that poke out from trees and --"

Hee! This is so awesome.

[info]geeklite

December 27 2006, 00:22:08 UTC 5 years ago

notpoetry, but only because I'm being a lemming.

[info]margec01

December 27 2006, 00:46:29 UTC 5 years ago

[info]notpoetry because I'm running out of people to vote for! But, hey, it's just for fun anyway.

[info]snarkymcsnarker

December 27 2006, 02:24:56 UTC 5 years ago

HA. That was great. Makes me anxious for the summer to start back up. And how is it that there was no camp song for Rodney's hate? There's a camp song for every occasion!

[info]porntestpilot

December 27 2006, 02:39:08 UTC 5 years ago

[info]scrunchy I haven't read it yet, but the outline sounds like her.

[info]wickedwords

December 27 2006, 02:49:31 UTC 5 years ago

[info]notpoetry the dialog just sounds like her stuff.

[info]hetrez

December 27 2006, 02:54:48 UTC 5 years ago

This story is fantastic.

[info]porntestpilot

December 27 2006, 03:03:59 UTC 5 years ago

//cheers// That was so much fucking fun, so if it is scrunchy, I *still* worship you and awesome. Just awesome.

[info]sheafrotherdon

December 27 2006, 03:55:08 UTC 5 years ago

this is made of so much awesome I can barely stand it. I mean, right from the beginning, John Sheppard, constantly soaked to the skin? Flirting with Rodney? Rodney finding him so hot and being so *damn* adorable? GENIUS.

*pets story*

[info]ladyagnew

December 27 2006, 04:22:05 UTC 5 years ago

[info], because it's not psychotic enough for [info]eleveninches (compliment!), not sublimely understated enough for [info]notpoetry, and just chaotic and fun enough to be [info]scrunchy's work. Besides, I think it's totally her characterization of John here: [info]eleveninches writes him as the dorkiest and most clueless & gayest person ever, and I don't really have a grasp on [info]notpoetry's characterization, but she tends to write things without much overt stating of things, and this John characterization is powerfully on the surface, if that makes sense.

Whoever wrote it, totally cool story! Besides the camp shenanigans and the awesome Rodney characterization, I loved the way their flirtation and attraction played out, so very playfully and taut. So much fun.

[info]daydreamer

December 27 2006, 04:23:55 UTC 5 years ago

I don't have any idea, but this was SOOO much fun to read. I love how horny and awkward Rodney is, and John being all tan and flirty and *wet and shirtless*. Mmmmmmm. :)

[info]sp23

December 27 2006, 04:59:48 UTC 5 years ago

Such a fun fic! All the details were wonderful, and all the guys fit so well into their assigned roles. And, of course, John and Rodney were wonderful. This totally made my evening.

[info]snarkist

December 27 2006, 06:06:56 UTC 5 years ago

[info]notpoetry, because of the humor and the dialogue style.

[info]etben

December 27 2006, 07:12:36 UTC 5 years ago

as someone who has been (and is, and will probably ever be) a camp counselor, I love this to BITS AND PIECES. It's smart and funny and spot-on, and had me cackling in glee from the first moment. No idea who wrote it, of course, since I never do, but whoever it is is my new favorite person in the whole entire universe.

[info]thefourthvine

December 27 2006, 09:39:16 UTC 5 years ago

[info]notpoetry, because - wasn't she a camp counselor? Or, okay, possibly I'm hallucinating that. Either way - this was a fun AU. And it makes me so, so, so, so glad I never went to summer camp, let alone worked there.

[info]queenofalostart

December 27 2006, 21:50:55 UTC 5 years ago

Totally [info]notpoetry, if for anything, the crazy camp setting.

[info]diluvian

December 28 2006, 00:59:09 UTC 5 years ago

Heeeeee! Awesome.

[info]adafrog

December 28 2006, 03:53:04 UTC 5 years ago

Very cute. Loved it.
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